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7eventh Vengeance

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[Feb. 6th, 2006|09:38 pm]
7eventh Vengeance
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Ok, this is a new poem i just cranked out. In order to really read this you need a little background. Esentially the "you" i'm speaking to is a girl I met up at the college. (Kelley, i remember I talked to you about it). The thing is she reminded me of some people I used to know (and ex-girlfriend no doubt) and i just got around to rationalizing the comparison. What come out of it was this:




Hollow words imply all we knew but never wished to know,
I read between the lines don't you know it's still the same?
You remind me of her only under a vastly different name,
While I never stop at the first sign of things begun,
I always know when it's the right time to run,
You face is new in my world but sadly your story's already been told,
They've all had big brains and a really pretty face,
but a total lack of self-control was thier last fall from grace,
You know I really want a girl with a little bit of soul,
Not somebody whose heart looks like a bullet hole.
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From: (Anonymous)
2006-02-15 09:53 pm (UTC)

hah i like this. its nice. yey you posted!
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From: (Anonymous)
2006-02-15 09:54 pm (UTC)
its V btw
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From: (Anonymous)
2006-02-15 09:55 pm (UTC)
i like the number 3
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