|It is unveiled!
||[Jan. 6th, 2006|11:34 pm]
This is the new story I've told you about. I'm sorry if either of you are offended by the intense description of the female character. It serves a purpose later in the storyline (as i may have told one of you...) that I could not possibly do without. I'm not trying to be offensive to women, not that I worry about any feminist bullshit from either of you all that much.
This is just the first few pages, an introduction to the hero and the heroine. (and just so you know, the female character is somewhat beyond my control). I may not have as much time to work on this as I'd like, so updates will be scarce. In any case, I'm trying to make myself more present in my writing, and this is the first of those attempts. Don't worry about any of that though. Just see if you like it, and by all means COMMENT!
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